For my groups short film we are doing a comedy action short based around a heist. We will have 4 characters; Chase: the driver, Anna: the informant, Lottie: the hacker, and Tony: the mastermind. I want this to be set up very intensely with comedic timing dialogue that keeps the audience laughing but doesn’t provoke disinterest through cheesiness. For our short we will need 2 different shooting areas, a industrial park back alley and a dingy planning basement where majority of the film would take place. The short is about 4 people robbing a silly place like Chuck e cheese or subway. Very climactic and tense buildup to a silly outcome.
I think if we can pull off this idea in a cinematic way it would be very entertaining.