Here’s my 30 second WIP. Kind of worried it looks more like a commercial than anything. Still some refinements that I need to make too.
DTC 435: Advanced Animation
Spring 2021
Here’s my 30 second WIP. Kind of worried it looks more like a commercial than anything. Still some refinements that I need to make too.
Love the tweaks done to the style and the change to the audio. I think it has a nice tone of just a little condescending, but in a way to draw attention to the issue (because people with crying children, will try to not think about it). I think the only thing I’d like to see changed would be the back of the woman’s head. It stands out a bit too much. Just make it black like the rest of the silhouettes, the audience is smarter than you think!
Thanks! I’ve come to realize that harnessing minor condescension can be a boon at times. I remembered that you mentioned a filter in class, might you remember what it was? It totally skipped my mind until now.