2 thoughts on “Kayleen McDonnell 30 Sec. PSA

  1. I’m super glad you took the advice we gave you last time! The factory looks much better. The transitions are great and this looks close to being done! My last recommendation would be to change the color of the fish to match the color scheme and that’s it!

  2. This looks great. Really smooth transitions and clean graphics. I wonder if you need “2016” and “2017” written above the calendars since they already have the year printed on them? Consider increasing the size of the calendars instead. The only other thing I noticed is that when you zoom out from the sign near the end, there is a small stutter, where the zoom either pauses or changes speed (not sure). Might want to take a look at that.

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