These ART two aliens walked into a ART bar, and CON the ART first alien
sez Q? to the ART second
alien, "Glzznrt Q? sorrff Q? aligog Q? mrrach Q? t'ch Q? schue Q? ?"`
Your paragraph has 1
sentence. You may want to think about breaking it into more than one sentence. Check to see if you have
more than one main idea.
Your average sentence length is 22 words. That is fairly high.
sentences are all within 0 words of the average length.
You may want to construct shorter
sentences, and try varying sentence length.
You subordinating conjunctions less than the average for
good writing. Try using words like "while," "when," and "although" more often.
You have 7
questionable words in your text. These may be dialect. If so, they are acceptable in informal writing.
They may be jargon (technical terms specific to a limited discourse community). If they are jargon, you
may want to evaluate their impact on your intended audience.