First of all, this is absolutely adorable and I love your art style so much! I like how you used pictures even in speech bubbles, it added to the charm of the story. You made it very clear what the characters were saying, even without using words! The personalities of the characters, their dynamic, and the plot were all very clear. You did well in establishing the world around them with plants, other kids, and animals. The formatting of the panels worked really well for me, especially the large panel of the monster in the cave at the end.
Hi Cynthia!
First of all, this is absolutely adorable and I love your art style so much! I like how you used pictures even in speech bubbles, it added to the charm of the story. You made it very clear what the characters were saying, even without using words! The personalities of the characters, their dynamic, and the plot were all very clear. You did well in establishing the world around them with plants, other kids, and animals. The formatting of the panels worked really well for me, especially the large panel of the monster in the cave at the end.
Nathan